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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story please continue on with it
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cooooooooooooooooooooooooool.... make another chapter. pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssse???????????????????????????
OMFG WTF LOL TTYL LOL
OMFG WTF LOL TTYL LOL
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Guess you started this before Terra came back. Keep writing I love this story.
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RGGGG!!!! UPDATE SOON OR I SHALL SMITE YOU UPON A JAGGED STALIGMITE OF DOOOOOM! (or is it stalagtite? *ponders* Terra would know! *sees Terra at the end of chapter 8**gets furious and hits her over the head with many metal chairs of death*
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT... WAS... F***ING SCARY!!
the part where raven gets pregnant! what a pleasant, yet (literally) stomach-churning surprise.
well not that pleasant but it was good & wonderfully unusual.
deliciously twisted, dangerously well-written. (f*** Cheetos?)
you should start writing horror stories or something, cuz damn! that pregnant thing got me good!
5-star material. let the ideas run rampant.
the part where raven gets pregnant! what a pleasant, yet (literally) stomach-churning surprise.
well not that pleasant but it was good & wonderfully unusual.
deliciously twisted, dangerously well-written. (f*** Cheetos?)
you should start writing horror stories or something, cuz damn! that pregnant thing got me good!
5-star material. let the ideas run rampant.
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March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
one more thing. Raven's not going to get cheated on, is she?
cuz if so, i'm gonna have to help 'BrianDarksoul' (who reviewed this story on march 9th)
with killing Terra [mrra-ha-ha-ha].
stab that lil' whore till she DROWNS in her own blood!!!! [rrra-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha]
I love being insane...
cuz if so, i'm gonna have to help 'BrianDarksoul' (who reviewed this story on march 9th)
with killing Terra [mrra-ha-ha-ha].
stab that lil' whore till she DROWNS in her own blood!!!! [rrra-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha]
I love being insane...
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SURPRISE! That's all you have to say! you better get the next chapter up soon or my head is going to explode. I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN. HURRY.
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOAH DOOD! TOO MUCH OF A PLOT TWIST FOR ME! (i suggest either battle 'til death between Terra and Raven' or 3some) cant wait to see what happens. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
P.S. Definetly one of, if not the best story on AFF
P.S. Definetly one of, if not the best story on AFF
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice.... good surprise....