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for To Be With You

by Comrade

person KD
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ur done! awww, no fair! it was good!
person Anon
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOt bad. But wasn't there another chapter?
person dark_kit2000
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DUDE!!!!!!!!! put in the last chappy or missin chappy or what ever!!!!!! tha could be ur christmas gift to like ppl like me cuz i have no life!!!!!!!!^_^ j/k anyway PLZZZZZZZZZ *gets on knees* PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!! hehe sry i get over excited a lot!
person dark_kit2000
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!!!! this is the best christmas ever ok maybe not the best but still pretty damn good!! Thank you!!!!
person MacabreCrow
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fantastic absolutely fantastic a fantastic BB/Rae Fic, you captured the charactures perfectly, also i invite you to read my fanfiction One Night by macabrcrow on Fanfiction.net its a BB / Rae fic as well have a happy holiday and never stop writing stories


your friend,
MacabreCrow
person Reepicheep-chan
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can appreciate the effort here, but it is awfully tedious.
person Wrath
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Diggin' this story. Writing style is fairly solid with few grammar errors. Keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter. it is developing well....
person Dark_kit2000
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am lovin ur story it has been like forever since some1 on this site wrote another bb/rav story. keep up the good work!!
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.... Hope there is more soon.