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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There are no words to describe how awesome this chapter is. Not one exhistin word would do it justice
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I reveiw Chapter 19 again. Please for the love of whaqt remains of my sanity
Continue this please.
*Sweats*
Must have......Coffee!
*Beastboy arches a brow*
Does anybdy else find Darksoul a little disturbed in the psyche?
Continue this please.
*Sweats*
Must have......Coffee!
*Beastboy arches a brow*
Does anybdy else find Darksoul a little disturbed in the psyche?
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You want hate? I never had a problem with her before, even after she betrayed them to Slade,
NOW I WANT TO KILL HER
NOW I WANT TO KILL HER
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey man this is great.All the charecters stay like they would in the show,the plot is is awsome and takes great twist, and the sex scnes are described really well.Can't wait for more chapters.
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good.
i like what you did with beast boy, and i definately agree with your portrayle of robin, star and terra.
first off, Terra is a complete biatch and should burn in hell, and i also think that she exactly the kniving witch you made her out to be.
i know robin definately has issues, and probably would be scared off by a relationship by star, but i don't hink he'ed go as far to frontly criticize bb and raven, although if things did climax that way, i'm sure robin's actions could be justifiable.
star is star, no problems there.
as for cy, there isn't really much to comment on. although i do think that bb would have to do a bit more to get back in cy's good lights, i don't think there is anything really ooc about him.
as for the story itself, very good, not too many grammer or spelling mistakes.
but sometimes, i think you get a bit confused, and switch around the him and hers, but apart from that, nothing more.
good work, update soon!
frimm
i like what you did with beast boy, and i definately agree with your portrayle of robin, star and terra.
first off, Terra is a complete biatch and should burn in hell, and i also think that she exactly the kniving witch you made her out to be.
i know robin definately has issues, and probably would be scared off by a relationship by star, but i don't hink he'ed go as far to frontly criticize bb and raven, although if things did climax that way, i'm sure robin's actions could be justifiable.
star is star, no problems there.
as for cy, there isn't really much to comment on. although i do think that bb would have to do a bit more to get back in cy's good lights, i don't think there is anything really ooc about him.
as for the story itself, very good, not too many grammer or spelling mistakes.
but sometimes, i think you get a bit confused, and switch around the him and hers, but apart from that, nothing more.
good work, update soon!
frimm
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read chap 19. Very typical of Robin. I am unimpressed with him.
I feel sad for Starfire. and I don't pity Terra in the slightest. Maybe dickless wonder can be her bunkmate in hell FOREVER!
Anyway I look forward to more. Also a very touching scene with BB/Rae good job!
I feel sad for Starfire. and I don't pity Terra in the slightest. Maybe dickless wonder can be her bunkmate in hell FOREVER!
Anyway I look forward to more. Also a very touching scene with BB/Rae good job!
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
glad your still writing. I hate when people stop writing good stories.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is about damn time, I've been waiting too long for you to update. Please don't ever keep me waiting like that again. I love this fic....
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes! another great chapter of another great story. this is one of my top 10 favorite stories to read (don't actually have a top 10 list).
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'd bow but I save that for Mistress Hoshi. That was just awesome. Simply incredible!