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for To Be With You

by Comrade

person Pndrgn
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just read chapter 14 and I love the whole breakdown. It was fucking beautiful. Everything was forgotten and all they could see were the words that seperated them. Powerful. Tears to the eyes, this story is great. I can't say anything else, I just love this story.
person Anon
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad rae + bb are still together. maybe the two should take a trip into raven's mind to visit the emotions. i hope you update soon
person Kagome950
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this!!! It took me ywo days to read it all up until now, you've done an excellent job keep it up! Oh an please do Update quickly!! ^_^
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A good ending to the chapter? what's for Brerakfast?
*Darksoul stops flailing Terra with a Cat-O-Nine tails whip*

Hold yer horses, getting blood that tastes good to vamps from this bitch id fucking near impossible! cut me some slack here people? SHEESH!

*Robin swallows and murmurs*
Must be good or the psycho called Brian will Kill me!
*Robin crawls into a featal position and sucks his thumb*

*Starfire blinks slightlly*
Freind Darksoul? is it true?

*Brian sneers and smirks*
Oh it's true............Robin has no dick!
person Zendura
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story as i always say, BUT ITS TO SHOOOOOORT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Jerky
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Incredible
You've captured everyone's emotions perfectly.

BTW, I thought of a new way to kill Terra... after the child is born, she could try to get rid of it because she sees it as a tie between the two. But as soon as the child is unhappy, it's powers surface and kill her
person Shyneamor
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please...please...please update. This is 'thee only' teen titan fic that I enjoy. I can't wait to see more.
person someone
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Comrade you must update this fic more often the wait is killer
person voltron-x
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes. thanx for the new chapter already waiting for the next. keep it up.
person Loneman
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep going. HOWVER, KILL the BITCH TERRA!!!!!!! pleaz keep going. AND DONT U DARE LET ANYTHING GET IN BETWEEN RAE AND BB! PEACE