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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have ta say i suck at writing but i can tell when its good. you have a rare talent you manage to make your readers feel the charachters emotions. you can manage to make ur readers feel sad for the charachters during their bad times even though they know the charachters arent real. im really lookin forward to ur next chapter.
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh and i agree with everyone else terra needs ta dye, but seriously ur an excellent writer never stop.
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
2 Thumbs up.
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June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fuckin kickass man. nice addition. for the next chapter, can u make terra die and BB/Rae get it on again. it would be "killer". thanx man.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more and keep it up is very interesting.
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooh shit!
that was good. i'd give ya a 21-gun salute to the radness, but i might get arrested for "apparently" preparing to kill someone.
that was good. i'd give ya a 21-gun salute to the radness, but i might get arrested for "apparently" preparing to kill someone.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heartwarmin and kickass. There's nothin I didn't like about this chapter besides tha fact that Terra still lives.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read chapter 15 Damn it was great
*Waits Paitentlly fort the duo to see who it is*
Don't mind me I am harmless...........
*Hides Metal Gear(Yes THAT Metal Gear) Behind his back*
I swear this is not a big sodding walking Tank that can launch Nukes anywhere in the world, and I swear I was NOT going to use it on Terra!
*Criosses his fingers behind his back*
Keep up the good work is all I can say
BrianDarksoul(The guy that REALLY needs therapy or a shitload of counciling)
*Waits Paitentlly fort the duo to see who it is*
Don't mind me I am harmless...........
*Hides Metal Gear(Yes THAT Metal Gear) Behind his back*
I swear this is not a big sodding walking Tank that can launch Nukes anywhere in the world, and I swear I was NOT going to use it on Terra!
*Criosses his fingers behind his back*
Keep up the good work is all I can say
BrianDarksoul(The guy that REALLY needs therapy or a shitload of counciling)
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice! The love scene was very tasteful and well done! A little hurried getting to the Beastboy-gets-Raven part, but overall, very good. 5 stars. Keep it up! ~ess
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please tell me your going to kill Terra off. Oh that Bitch needs to died a bloody and painful way.
Oh how I hate her. But you know what they say what gose around comes around. So I know
that bitch will get whats coming to her and I hope Raven is the one to give it to her! so I hope you
hurry with the next chapter can't wait to see what happens to her!
Oh how I hate her. But you know what they say what gose around comes around. So I know
that bitch will get whats coming to her and I hope Raven is the one to give it to her! so I hope you
hurry with the next chapter can't wait to see what happens to her!