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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So are you gonna use my idea? Oh and how long will it take for you to make the next chapter?
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dont let Terra break up BB/Rae. let BB and/or Rae kill or make Terra go away. please continue
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May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more quikly its good!!!!!
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In the next chapter I think you should have Rae and BB Looking in the fake diary and Rae notices that its not her diary. And they finally find the real one and Rae allows BB to read it and its about how they met, their marriage, or sort of like a day to day journal. If you need any help email me at Snowflake21133@yahoo.com and tell me ur comerce that way ill know what its about.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you. I need you...to write more of this. Good conflict. The vampire thing makes OOC-ness fine. I CRAVE MORE BLOOD!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude emotional roller coaster!
Kill tha blonde bitch!
Kill tha blonde bitch!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
..Someone hand me a sword *Someone gives Dragona a sword, and starts tearing up a random person* ARRGHHH!!! Damn, for a vampire story, that was pretty awesome. Terra cheating on Raven, BB cheating on Raven, Raven cheating on BB... Where was I again?? Either way, looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE HELL IS HAPPENING, I WANNA SEE, I WANNA SEE, I WANNA SEE, I----WANNA----SEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
I WANNA SEE! is their gonna be demon sex on the floor with terra as the half-dead life-size plaything to wrestle with??????
wait, Rae thinks he might be cheating...
FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT!!!
i think i'll wait till chapter 15 before i come back.
I WANNA SEE! is their gonna be demon sex on the floor with terra as the half-dead life-size plaything to wrestle with??????
wait, Rae thinks he might be cheating...
FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT! FIGHT!!!
i think i'll wait till chapter 15 before i come back.
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope BB tells Raven what he is planning to do to Tera amnd tell her in DETAIL what Terra told him
If that doin't piss of Raven that the Fact that Terra tried to put a wedge between her and BB then nothing will
Raven can indeed help assurge the doubt that BB is having indeed .
*Grabs Terra and Throws her in Taturus*
Hades needs some lying skanks to help relieve the doomed shades of criminals eternal bordeom anyway
Liking the fact that Terra is about to get Punished VERRY HARSHLLY
BrianDarksoul~
If that doin't piss of Raven that the Fact that Terra tried to put a wedge between her and BB then nothing will
Raven can indeed help assurge the doubt that BB is having indeed .
*Grabs Terra and Throws her in Taturus*
Hades needs some lying skanks to help relieve the doomed shades of criminals eternal bordeom anyway
Liking the fact that Terra is about to get Punished VERRY HARSHLLY
BrianDarksoul~
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tha beast abd vamp have come out and blondie is sufferin! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!
Now we need a BB/Rae make up moment..
7/5
thank you Comrade!
Now we need a BB/Rae make up moment..
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thank you Comrade!