rate_review Reviews

I love the story.

we need more
especially more Rob/BB

Excellent! lots of ooc, but taken care of with a simple wonderful story. I'm not sure how much I liked blackfire getting babied quite so much, but I can see the allure that some might have.

I hasten off now. Don't tarry on a similar acount of this literature. Strive forth and compel me henceforth perhaps even more than I have been already.

great ending
could've used more sex though

I really like your story but I dont read the gay chapter, but was a really fucking good story keep it up, but maybe u should it finish the story with a sex scene, well see ya.!

that... was... awesome...

this is so wrong

I think you've lost you're mind.
But maybe I have too for reading the whole thing.

A very interesting chapter, it opens up a whole new set of possabilities. Such as bit of a team up between BB and Blackfire to get even with Starfire, well only after a little heart to heart as it were. I think it may be the only way BB gets out of this alive and I know it may seem vindictive but Star needs to be taught a lesson in how to treat people. Anyway enough of my rant and I hope to read more soon.

LOL, this is some wild stuff out there stuff, like most of your stuff, but as always entertaining. Poor BB, poor Robin, poor Star, all totally screwed up in one way or another.

Well atleast BB and Star's problem looks to be getting resolved. As for Robin....well whatever Star did to him seemed to really break his mind, heh. Maybe he isn't really totally gay, Star just scared him off the idea of women, lol sweet old Star and her crazy fetishes. Well one possible solution would be for BB to give Robin his pet Blackfire, have Rob-o use her to work out a few things, see what it's like to be in control. And if he really is gay, there's always Speedy, lol.

Well I look forward to seeing where you go with your next chapter, cause this stuff is odd, cheesy, and I love it.