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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue i want to know whats going to happen on the date. (whispers to myself) beast boy, your an idiot.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love the story really hope you continue with another chapter soon
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wtf
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm just saying this, but Raven's name is Rachel.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, but you need to work on description outside what people are saying or thinking.
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Oh that was good, that was good.
I hope there's more forthcoming.
Oh that was good, that was good.
I hope there's more forthcoming.
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved your fic, but the reason I'm writing this is because this fic is gonna be deleted. This fic has no disclaimer, and according the main page, it says all fic with no disclaimer are gonna get earsed. I'm just writing this because your fic is too good to be deleted for such a small reason. Please, write a short one up quick, don't let future readers of this fic miss out on it cause of such a silly reason. Your story is too good to lose because of this little technicality.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
While it's a refreshing perspective on Beastboy, I just don't think he would ever become as mature as you write him in your stories. His childishness is one of his most amusing qualities, and taking that away robs him of his charm. Perhaps if you focused on a bit more backstory related to Beastboy, and his lack of self esteem or the like I could believe it more. Still it was an interesting take on the Raven/Beastboy pairing.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In response to what Julia said, Garfield is Beastboy's real name in the comic from way back when.
Great story, keep it up
Great story, keep it up
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this is awesome! It's a great story and I loved the last scene with BB and Raven...Rave was hilarious!
Uhmmm...The only thing you need to work on is your tenses. You switch back and forth between past and present, I, we, he and they. Other than that, It's a good story and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment!
Ja ne
Shippo-chan
Uhmmm...The only thing you need to work on is your tenses. You switch back and forth between past and present, I, we, he and they. Other than that, It's a good story and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment!
Ja ne
Shippo-chan