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for Decisions

by Pndrgn

person jozepy
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so far so good
it was little hard to tell who was talking at times
hope to see more soon
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there...I saw your review on my Teen Titan's story and I wanted to say thank you for your kind words...I am glad you like it...By the way, I like this story of yours...Think I'll read your other one...Your good...
person julia
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uhh garfield?
person ThE LoRd AnD MaSTeR
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FoamY!!!!!


Really though, this story is GOLD! I look forard to how it will turn out. It's pretty HOT! This is really good stuff!

Finish it!

THE LORD AND MASTER COMMANDS!!!
person Cameron
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, your story rocks! You really have to make some more to this story, it rocks!
person Desolation
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yep really likeing this.
Keep it up I cant wait to see what BB dose to win over Raven!
person sinkore
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have beastboy go throught a drastic change in attitude and apperance and accsident or somthing. if that idea dosnt strick any sparks just remember this is you story and you should be able to figure out how to make it work.
person miho spacemonkey
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Compelling, emotional and very thought provoking, well done.

Keep going. ^_^
person kai
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm... confused. no.i'm really confused my head hurts and nw i'm dizzy
person MaginMan
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good stuff so far. I am tempted to get all grammar-nazi on you, but I think your story is good enough to warrant some slack. Although you don't seem to have a real in-depth plot, "Decisions" seems to be more about feelings than events. I love the way you tap into BB's mind, and the way you define love is so accurate it's scary. I hope that this story doesn't end next chapter, but I wouldn't want you to drag it on longer than you need to. I’ll be looking forward to your next update. Thanks.