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for The Drawing

by jameswritingfun

person fleur
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cyborg is SO dead, but that was hilarious
person skyger
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i would really like to see more this is a very interesting story with a lot of good writing and even more potential
person Johnny Boy
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I ahve to say for this persons writing is that it is rather extrodinary, although the writer has stated scenes of sex aren;t a forte that the oomph comes from the mood woven into this art.
Thumbs Up!
person Shard
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very nice chapter and I'm really getting to love this story. It has a very good amount of humor wich I love, anyway looking forward to chapter 5.
person Drkman
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going this is definetely getting good
person Wanderer3
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure someone might have mentioned this already, and I can't believe I am myself. But, you could do the "Titanic bit", BB drawing Raven in the nude, if she allows him to live that long. Think about it. Lata.
person joey
schedule December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, nos pls update ssssssoooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!
person johntheheavy
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice start you got here i like bb's artistic side which i don't think has ever been explored before. awesome
person Blaze waterflower
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good work. This is great start can't wait for the next chapter.
person Qwanjin
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to this story continuing. I really enjoy the use of both Raven's internal sister's and Beast Boy's artist side, to me it helps bring more to the chars. I wonder what BB will draw next?