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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww!! is that the end?!?!? i want to see if the babbies have powers! imagine the tantrums when one kid turns into a vicious little monkey and the other telekinetically tears the room apart! You could do an embarassing breast-feeding scene in the lounge! Although they'd probably hurt you for that...
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the name junior is awful... name the baby fletcher cuz that is a sexy name!!!!
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October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read Chapter 4
I agree Short but oh so sweet.
Who was Cy calling Sweetie? Jinx? Bumblebee? Wonderwoman? Mr Myxlplix?
I agree Short but oh so sweet.
Who was Cy calling Sweetie? Jinx? Bumblebee? Wonderwoman? Mr Myxlplix?
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have read up to Chapter 3.
I am intruiged and amused.
Especially with the little antidodes the TT cast and you have at the end of the chapters
a nice unique touch
I am intruiged and amused.
Especially with the little antidodes the TT cast and you have at the end of the chapters
a nice unique touch
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very cute! do you ever write anything that the characters like? lol, i love the way you give their opinions on the stories! i would have thought Raven would be terrified at being pregnant though, but with those strange cravings pregnant women get do you reckon she'll develop a taste for tofu?! No qualms with the plot, but if you polished up the grammer a bit (god i sound like an english teacher!) it would be easier for people to read. Obviously grammer isn't as important as plot though.
k, luv ya, bye!
k, luv ya, bye!
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beastboy raven pairing you got somthing thier