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by Malcore

person slytherinsess
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok...well this is the most amusing teen titans fic. i have ever read. (no joke) i really like this and i will continue to read your storys...as long as they are humor(i have a small issue w/ how far some people go w/ lemons)
person ubermann
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like this strange tale, i feel sorry for raven i hope beast boy will get her the help she needs


The ubermann
person CT
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Look, your fics are pretty good. They've got plots and storylines, ORIGINAL storylines, but your spelling and grammar are... well... unsatisfactory... If you need an editor or something just ask someone. Hell, I'd do it. Just e-mail me with a fic and I'd get it back to you within the day you sent it to me. Most people are the same. I began to read this the other day and I stopped because it was becoming difficult to understand what you were saying. I only finished it today out of will. Please consider my offer.

~*CT*~
person animeking
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, chapter 5 isn't too bad. Although I had originally been hoping for something similar to "Red X's Desire", this has turned out very nicely.
person meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOhhhhhhhhhh good one
person capcomfreak4life
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DOGG! yuh sick, man! waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay! why must you ppl ALWAAAAAAAAAYS pick on raven?!?!
story's going good though. ha haaaa
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... What the devil is it with you and diapers? o_O

Keep improving though, kid.
person wooo
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! nice! this is great! nice work! u gotta continue! ples continue soon!