schedule
July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ooo i really like this story! pls keep on writing! ur really good at this! i look forward to reading another update asap :)
schedule
August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet dude! :)
schedule
August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As Steve Irwin is won't to say? CRIKEY! Great Hooly Magoolie! This third chapter entitled Azarath is Intense!
Loved the depth within it? and damn if Raven's sdomewhat kinky after her first? woah now THAT's a Mark I bet BB would be proud to show!
I am interested at where it goes from here. then again I am an insane perverted bugger Ain't I?
Keep it up BrianDarksoul
Loved the depth within it? and damn if Raven's sdomewhat kinky after her first? woah now THAT's a Mark I bet BB would be proud to show!
I am interested at where it goes from here. then again I am an insane perverted bugger Ain't I?
Keep it up BrianDarksoul
schedule
August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start
schedule
August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Trigon's proud of Raven
Now I've seen it all.
Now I've seen it all.
schedule
August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, your interruption with the alarm is pretty sweet. I love your descriptions and I am excited to see what happens when Raven gets to her home planet with BB, wait, I mean Beast! Nice spin on the story man!
schedule
August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, really nice story, I like the way it flows...
But what I don't like... is that you didn't finish it!!! ;_;
Oh wells, sound really sexy... YOU GO!!!!
Congrats,
Luc
But what I don't like... is that you didn't finish it!!! ;_;
Oh wells, sound really sexy... YOU GO!!!!
Congrats,
Luc
schedule
July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome! read my stories!
my conscience: that was a little rude and selfish, wasn't it?
yeah, so! the fic is nice and i want to get reviews too!
my conscience: *nods* true... true...
my conscience: that was a little rude and selfish, wasn't it?
yeah, so! the fic is nice and i want to get reviews too!
my conscience: *nods* true... true...
schedule
July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well Robin did haver to open his fat yapper? You can't get more Evil and badass as Trigon.
schedule
July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I...well, I didn't even bother reading this after the third paragraph. It was hurting my eyes.
You need some serious lessons in indentation, punctuation, grammar, spelling, and generally you need to take a course in English beyond that of Elementary School level before you get anything higher than a one star rating from me.
You need some serious lessons in indentation, punctuation, grammar, spelling, and generally you need to take a course in English beyond that of Elementary School level before you get anything higher than a one star rating from me.