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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I did enjoy this story, it certainly reminds me one of the episodes where "beast" comes out (I don't remember titles well). I like the pacing and buildup of what the characters are about rather than forcing a relationship. I personally always liked taking it from "canon" then shifting it into my own story rather than starting AU and going from there.
Hope to see more chapters of this!
Hope to see more chapters of this!
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November 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
PLZ Nos write more...PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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September 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I loved the part where he noticed her staring at his chest. 'I am up here now' lol. please continue this story.
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another fun story, you are really a good author i love your BB and Raven stories. BB's changes add a interesting twist to the story, with the is he the same one she loved, will he turn back to normal ect. This story is delightful to read please write another chapter!
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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really liked it. keep it p pleas update!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Reading Chapter 2*
Well done my freind well done!
I look forward to reading more on this!
Well done my freind well done!
I look forward to reading more on this!
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Rubs hands together covertlly and snickers maniacally*
Oh yes GooodBB Check out her tits man GOOD BB Squeeze em Make her your dark proincess Bride Then fuck her Brains Out!
*BB sweatdrops*
BB: Dude take a valluim or something...your seriouslly feaking M here. Rasven wouldn't like that
*Raven thinking to herself*
I wouldn't be too sure about that, at least I would be getting fucked regular and not that earthmoving ho Terra
Oh yes GooodBB Check out her tits man GOOD BB Squeeze em Make her your dark proincess Bride Then fuck her Brains Out!
*BB sweatdrops*
BB: Dude take a valluim or something...your seriouslly feaking M here. Rasven wouldn't like that
*Raven thinking to herself*
I wouldn't be too sure about that, at least I would be getting fucked regular and not that earthmoving ho Terra
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty cool. Writing is good and so far the story is good. Nothing too great but it wasn't a waste of time. It really depends on what comes later. Also does the uniform include shoes? And is this going to get a NC-17 rating eventually? Or at least earn a R rating.
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more more more more it that good i want more more more more
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is one of the best fanfics I have read in a while. You are really good! Please keep writing, I'm totally hooked!