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for A Day of Housework

by makoryoshi

person jozepy
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
goood read
person capcomfreak4life
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
everybody must work! wicked story yo!
take it from an original sicko in here. this story's hot. i'm not askin for new chapters mainly because i think this is a one-shot. anyway KEEP IT UP!
*raven grabs BB's cock and grins as it hardens back uuuuuuuuuupppppppppp*
raven: like this?
freak: yeah... like that *rolls eyes*
person Kinju
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, pretty good but, needs a plot.
person jozepy
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good work ilike it
the POV did piss me off
hope you do more soon

PS i love Mt.Grime:)
person Tikitaka
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Meep! Say, for your next fic, possibly BB fucks Rae in different animal forms?
person That guy
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please please please please please please please pah-lease write more! That was sooo good, it was downright perfect.
person IllEatYu
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!! I've always dreamed of Beast Boy giving Raven anal. PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?
person lurved it
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww it was so cute! i loved it and god its soo hard to type while masterbating...
person RavenGothGirl
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool. It's a little hard to read because of all the POV's. Still good job. Write more soon.
person Hakuryuu
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice, cute fic! Really nice portrayal of Raven.. T.T I know her pain! Anyway, keep up the nice work! It seemed a little farfetchedd, but it worked well with the fic. Very nice!