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for A Day of Housework

by makoryoshi

person Kiyrh Night
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG This is mai favourite couple.. ^__^ Veery good. I congradulate. ^^_
person Brian
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woah,this was something indeed.
So like is this only a once off thing,read and forget,if so then that in itself is rather anti-climatic and depressing.
Such a detailed chapter deserves a continuation,methinks it is up to you to realise this faccet.
person oldwolf
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The End? What do you mean 'the end'? I honestly hope to see more stories soon. Until next time.
person HentaiKagura
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!!Bravo!!THAT was a really good lemon.Try adding details on the kisses, though.You know, tongue or no tongue.Next chapter just HAS to be a Robin/Starfire lemon.
person Sandra
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, you should really continue this story! I loved it!
person ApriL
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good story
person S.M.
schedule December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story,you really should write a sequal or two,either that or add more chapters
person Bec
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you should really continue this one. its great! maybe put some robin/starfire in it.
person Ryan
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well if you have Raven claiming that Robin and Starfire are doing it as much as she claims you had better have proof (or a fanfic) to back up this claim don't you think?
Simply put very nice lemon, now do one for Robin/Starfire. Possibly set before this fic.
person W.X
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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