rate_review Reviews

That is one of the GREATEST stories I have ever read!5 STARS;)

That was awsome, I love the ending you gave it, it was perfect.

Absolutely AWESOME story. I love how you repeated the first paragraphs followed by "Just like every time before." It really added something special when it finally deviated. You really and truely are a great author. Keep the stories coming!!

jozepy like it
but it did kind of run off for abit
but it was still good

Wow. When i talk to my friend, i tell her that some of these stories are so beautiful that you don't usually find in real life, she just laughs. She says that the person who wrote this is perverted, well actually its a beautiful thing and you keep it that way. Great now I'm all emotional. Still great job, but you shouldn't have repeated the sex part twice. just too much i mean we already read that part. Good Job!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^

that's some present you wrote to BB
lucky beast.

dude, this was awesome! BB and Raven go really well together! I love it!

I like it, being brief and a little sad at times, clever use of repetition to create for the reader the idea of a never ending circular dream. I have one or two things to knitpick at but that's besides the point, for a shorter story like this the pacing and development is apropiate; Although I think that it would be unnecessarily cruel/elaborate on Raven's part to tease BB for a whole 3 bloody years...(that evil witch! just kidding) I would've found it more endearing if the dreams for the last 3 years would have been a shared subconcious experience, then used some form of Deux Ex Machina to bring the action to fruition.
It is still very sweet that they said their "I love yous" so yes you did erotica with heart. That is very good.

A beautiful evocotive and enigmatic tribute to the two in question, it brought a tear to my eye indeed, you have some tallent with this fic, pity it is a one shot though, not meaning to sound ungratefull but the way it was presented ,to my mind sceams of a long series fiction

Congratulations
BrianDarksoul~

This is really good...it has the plot laid down very nicely so its hard to lose focus of what going on! i like the use of first person because it gave the readers a better idea of what was going on in beast boys head. good job!