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for Wings

by Comrade

person Ya-Wei
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thats it? is that the end of the story? I HOPE NOT!!! Or else....YOU"LL REGRET IT!!!!! Update okay??? I want you to UPDATE! Is that clear? GOOD!*roar*
person Dragona
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You just love spamming don't you...
To answer your question, 9 is the last chapter, Comrade told me himself.

Now thats a good story, Nice job.
person LoveGuardian.
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how Raven talks to her emotions. It's an aspect that doesn't get shown a lot. Yay for Beast Boy! He always comes through for her. So, what's next? Is this story almost done? Waiting patiently for chapter 9
person LoveGuardian
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome job on this chapter. I don't know how they're gonna defeat Trigon, but I'm sure it'll be really good. Can't wait for the next chapter!
person LoveGuardian
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The drama continues. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope that BB can get to Raven before she's too upset to control her powers. That could be very bad.
person Atom
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh This is getting Sooo good. I can not wait untill it is done.
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Read Chapter 4 Damn good indeed I am impressed indeed
*Snickers mischeviouslly* Go BB Go BB it's yer birthday!
person Sasha
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Continue soon!
person LoveGuardian
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for Raven! I'm glad that she got through to Beast Boy. Pie? He's so funny. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Nikki

P.S. I finally got chapter 4 up in my story.
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hell yeah I want Pie, The Rock Loves Pie so would I
The question is.......
BB*Arching a brow like 'The Rock'* Raven, do you like ............Pie?"

Damn the second chap was darkish , How could the tirtans tramatize BB that way ,Geez ya think with Raven's psychic ability she could have warned against such an option they chose to calm him, If I were BB I would kick their assess on principle! bedamned with the consiquenses!