rate_review Reviews

Two words: Heart wrenching. I like the way you pace the tale and describe the grief, so far all the characters are true to form and their dialog if somewhat poignant is relevant to the current mood; Which by the way you have captured flawlessly; while BB’s own pain is the centerpiece, the rest of the Titans come off as both trying to deal with their own lesser sense of loss and the awkwardness they are trying to overcome while attempting to help their friend, add to that the feeling that Raven has more going on with her, but as usual chooses not to share, brilliant. I must commend you in the subtle reference to past events; Robin’s “…not recently” is a great use of background color and character development.

I am curious as to how you are going to bring this around –and please do, I feel most unmanly getting all teary eyed at my keyboard- I hope you are able to update soon.

Oh yeah before I forget: Dragona? I’m new here and have just started reading, funny enough I just started one of your pieces today –The Holy Blader- I promise as soon as I finish reading the whole thing, I’ll review it.

You Need to Write more of this soon. ITS GREAT!

How come no one reviews my work? This is so unfair..

I like it as well, keep it up.