rate_review Reviews

excellent. i like your taste, comrade.
good work, keep it up!

I like this ending a lot better than what really happened at the end of the last Terra episode. They were evil, you were sweet. You are good writer. I think that you should write a sequal to this story. I can think of a few ideas if you need help.

Nikki

good job. this is how i really wanted the real episode to go. . . . . . . too bad it didn't, you need some work on wri writeing, its a litttle monotone, but your ideas and visulization are great, keep writing. (ps: beast boy owns a bunk bed not a king size, reason for bunkbed unknown)

Very good hurry and complete it so i givegive it a rating



i give this a UN-COMPLETE

No Spell Checking?? I only noticed 3 errors... so not much to work on there; and YES that is important, if the story is concise and spelled properly it becomes a pain for most people to read... anyway 'through it in our faces' should be 'threw it in our faces', thats the one thing I will point out. Since it happens to be a grammar error and not a spelling one.
Anyway, the story is shaping up slowly, but well nonetheless. Interested in seeing more from you, since you seem to a k a knack for decent plot building and some interesting takes on the existing characters. Oh one story note, the Contest of Champions episode hints at the recharge time of Cyborg being more in the vacinity of 15 minutes not 10 hours, though it may be an exaggeration of Robin at the point in time. Keep up the good work.

bah speaking of need for spell check/grammar control. the line 'if the story is concise and spelled correctly' just toss in a Not there and it makes perfect sense... heh Ah well. Thought I would toss that up before you read that and got confused for a second there. considering I cannot edit posts I have to add another review to clarify. Sorry about that.