rate_review Reviews

Nice twist and storyline

I like it. Such a long impressive chapter. Why are they trapped in there? Does it have anything to do with the fact that they just had sex because Robin could get through it before they did so? What are going to do while they are trapped in the bubble? Is there a way to get out or are they to be trapped forever? Do they even want to get out? I mean in the bubble Raven is free to express her emotions and love Robin so do they want to get out? Will the others find them? Will they bubble disappear when the week or how ever long is up? Will you please update soon?

Of courtse that bubble won't "dissipate"....Raven has just had sexual intercourse with Robin and..maybe something within her won't allow it to let them "escape". Considering the fact that Raven has never HAD sex with a "mortal", perhaps that bubble has a will of its own- either to punish her or allow her to remain at Robin's side.....FOREVER. So many intriguing possibilities...I did think Robin's efforts to explain to Raven about the delicate art of lovemaking was quite touching...only a TRUE friend would do that without taking advantage of the situation. But, as it stands now, Raven's sexual awakening is VERY dangerous....and not just to Robin. I await the next chapter to see what happens NEXT......