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by MaliceIriana

schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Raven really does have the potential to be romantically ill. She's shown herself to have all the gleeful cruelty of a demon, she presumably leads a rich fantasy life through her reading, and for all her repression, her emotions come out when they want. Further, aware of her origins, she may equate sex with rape, expecting and even wanting such treatment from a lover.

All that potential, wasted! Ah, well. Thanks for the RobRae, I'll certainly be waiting for the next chapter, but I might've felt it more if you'd gone just a little deeper into detail. 7?
person Scarlet
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, that was awesome... I absolutely loved it and I can´t wait to read the next chapter... I´m sure it will be awesome...
person mistress of the furious cloak
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm not one for rape fics... but this i liked for some reason >.>...

you should add another chapter about Raven and Robin actually doing it >.>

perhaps play out his or her fantasy(s)?

wonderful ^-^

-the mistress