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Ok first off i shall state. Please do not make your Chapter's long. As much as i love reading a well written, orginal fiction. Longer Chapters sometimes make ze Readers. A bit restless. If you may. Aside from that. I adore, and admire your use of dialouge. Your OC Characters Rebelle, RJ, Alice. offer an interesting veiw. On what really goes on in Jump City. The fact that the teens are being repressed. is something i've often wondered about. All i can say is well done. You shall be added to my Recomended Reading list. Please update soon. Oh.. And i can't believe you only have four.. (Well five now) Reviews!! With your viewpoint and well written skills. You deserve much, much more. Oh! And please continue with the RobinxRaven love interest. Those two are my favourite pairing. ^_^

great i really like it the only problem is the chapter length they need to be longer other than that a great fic

I like your OC Rebelle,she seems to be totaly insane in a totaly sane way...:)I bet she looses it big time.
keep going,but why make the chapters so long?Smaller chapters=more chapters=more readers.
Antway I rate *****stars...one of my favourites:)

Well done. Completely original take on things, as far as I can tell perfect spelling and
grammar, well-done characters, and a viewpoint that no one else has done.

Again, well done. I want to keep reading this story if you can keep it up.