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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this has rendered me speechless. The emotions at play. Ze raw, powerful emotion of lust/desire/love. You must add more? Prehaps.. Robin's outlook on things, instead of Raven's? would make an interesting view point. Please consider ze idea? The voyuerism was a nice touch, The feeling that i was watching something, that i shouldn't played into mind. Which left me slightly un-settled, like i would be caught at any given moment. Yet, your words left me spellbound... I really admire, your talents as a writer... And if you happen to write more Raven/Robin Fan ficts. Please e-mail me with the update!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved your fic, its so beautiful... i'm a big raven/robin fan....
i love your portraital on the "relationship" of the too... very well done
i love your portraital on the "relationship" of the too... very well done
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked that its very good. i dont have words to describe it good wow etc
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was a really good one shotter, I like the way you do it in first person. You should continue with this fic, it's really good!
Rate: 5 starz!
EF
Rate: 5 starz!
EF
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear god, that RULED! I LOVED IT!!
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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I loved it.
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is good...plz wrtie a sequel
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... stunning great i love Raven Robin pairings but they are few and far between and most of them are likke this
Raven: I have a crush on robin oooo i hate starfire
Robin: Dont worry raven i dont like starfire like i like you!
*mindless monkey sex ensues*
Which of course is a step up from most RobStar ones
Robin: Hi Star! Wanna fuck?
Starfire: What is a penis? What is this cum you speak of? Wow is this an orgasm your earthly ways are indeed strange
*mindless monkey sex insues*
Robin: I love you Star
Starfire: What is this love you speak of?
*sigh* well at least yours is kickass but i would feel more complete with some mindless monkey sex later on
Raven: I have a crush on robin oooo i hate starfire
Robin: Dont worry raven i dont like starfire like i like you!
*mindless monkey sex ensues*
Which of course is a step up from most RobStar ones
Robin: Hi Star! Wanna fuck?
Starfire: What is a penis? What is this cum you speak of? Wow is this an orgasm your earthly ways are indeed strange
*mindless monkey sex insues*
Robin: I love you Star
Starfire: What is this love you speak of?
*sigh* well at least yours is kickass but i would feel more complete with some mindless monkey sex later on
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Cool, I really like the stalker\obsession thing. Please update! I want more, more, more!!!!!
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December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...you have rendered me to sort out a mixture of emotions that I thought I would never feel at the same time.
I love that you make this a raw piece of love and desire, and you don't equate the two as the same thing. There's no lovey-dovey stuff here, and that is always appreciated.
The voyuerism thing is what makes this so very good, and yet it is what made me feel so very uncomfortable most of all. Besides, what Robin was doing in the shower was perfectly natural and everybody does it, but the fact that she was watching him do it, is what really got to me.I think you're very bold and very clever for writing this.
I'm mean, the words you used hooked me from sentence one, and as I got further and further into the story, I was siezed with discomfort, yet I wanted to know what happens next. You turned me into a voyeur as well.
To me, that is brilliant story telling. When you can elicit this kind of emotional quagmire in me, I think that your mission is accomplished. Loved the story. It was mature, and yet, disturbing. But I absolutely loved it too. So Excellent job. Really. Later
I love that you make this a raw piece of love and desire, and you don't equate the two as the same thing. There's no lovey-dovey stuff here, and that is always appreciated.
The voyuerism thing is what makes this so very good, and yet it is what made me feel so very uncomfortable most of all. Besides, what Robin was doing in the shower was perfectly natural and everybody does it, but the fact that she was watching him do it, is what really got to me.I think you're very bold and very clever for writing this.
I'm mean, the words you used hooked me from sentence one, and as I got further and further into the story, I was siezed with discomfort, yet I wanted to know what happens next. You turned me into a voyeur as well.
To me, that is brilliant story telling. When you can elicit this kind of emotional quagmire in me, I think that your mission is accomplished. Loved the story. It was mature, and yet, disturbing. But I absolutely loved it too. So Excellent job. Really. Later