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for Romance Novel

by sesshoumaru

schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As I have most likely said before: PLEASE FINNISH IT!!!! If you don't me and ALL these other readers are going to burst into an angry frenzy and.... well I haven't thought of that part yet... just finnish it!!!
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok I didn't say it before- and by the way I answered my own question about chapter 2...
person -Me-
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just a quick question: The entire bottom of chapter 2 is italic- the font used when she is usually day dreaming- some of it sounded like what as actually happening- so I was just wondering: Am I just being stupid and its all her head or was it just bolth her mind and reality in italic? It's probally just me....
person Lily
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! that was awesome, YOU have to continue!!
person Gemini
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWW!!!!! Where's the rest of it?! I must have more!...Please.^_^
person Marsha
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this was a great story. I really wish you'd continue with it. I think it's pretty exciting. And if you could finish it up in any way, it would be even more wonderful. :)
person blackrosephantom
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its cute and a little bit of a turn on. however, you need to make robin as confident in himself as he is in the show. also, like the hero in romance novels.
person dark_angel_05
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was great hope u update soon
person XshadyblueX
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
dood a man! this is a good story! updateful!
person Manima
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good job so far. You do a good job drawing the reader in. I look foreward to any future installments.