rate_review Reviews

I just got done reading all 6 chapters and I really lough like your story. Your O.C. Is fun & inventiv, andi thought your word play with etragen was creative. I also like what you have done and are doing with rage. I have seen a few mistakes but I give you a scor of 8.75 out of 10. Keep up the good work ;)

ive read your story and i really liked the smut you did with raven more plz ^^,

I Do Hope your still writing this as this is one of the more enjoyable fics i've found

i never gave up hope. i checked every day. im glad your still doing ok =)great chapter!

welcome back! i figured life was hitting you hard (had some troubles myself) and glad to see your doing ok. looking forward to the next chapter =) this one was great

looking foreward to future chapters.

I don't know if you're still looking for a new title or not but if you are I have some suggestions after reading the ch. 1-4

'The results of a simple Act' and 'How heroism can change us'

i have been checking every day. hope college is going well *brings you a 5 gallon pot of coffee* for the all night study sessions =)

excellent chapter. i was very entertained. just one question though.

ive noticed in the tv show that raven can "feel" what happens in her mind when someone inertacts with one of her personalities (when cyborg and beastboy were with her "happy" personality, raven in the normal world had uncontrollable bursts of laughter)

my question is did she feel what kyle did with her angry side and how did she react?

hope your not mad and i really hope i didnt ruin any future plots you got planned with that question. i really like this story.

great chap

yay second chapter! glad your back. hope college finals went ok.

story title is fine. i guess if you are not a hero (although i can see some dormant power waking up in him later lol) it would be a long day to live in the headquarters of a super hero team

looking forward to further updates dude (or dudette if your a girl)! YOU ROCK!