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Um...  I think something glitched and removed most of the text from your chapters...

I think you're making raven a bit too weak, and she's barely used her powers, we all know that she could really do some damage if she wanted to. And when is she going to tell them that she's a demon? Well, half demon. Cause I really want to see her get pissed and get some revenge. And I keep visualizing what the other titans would do in this situation. Cause robin, starefire, and beastboy would kick some ass and I thing they would think cyborg was a god or something, cause he would glow!!!

Nice story you got there. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

I'm interested to see exactly how it is she's going to get caught (which I'm presuming is going to happen). I mean, she has powers that no-one else has, and she's basically being sticking around out of courtesy up until now. The way things currently are, even if she were spotted she wouldn't have much trouble escaping.
Perhaps some magical artifact? Given this is still the same universe, it seems likely that there are Greek Gods and the like, and that they could have already forged something that would keep her powers in-check, like a special 'nymph' collar or such. Otherwise it becomes an increasingly doubtful and dubious thing for her to remain where she is.
Of course, you might be wanting her to leave anyway, so...I guess we can wait and see!

I love your story, it very entertaining. I'll eagerly await a new chapter

Just wanted to say that I loved it and can't wait for you to continue! Just a bit curious..but is Raven going to show off her powers soon?

You have really improved since your "Azula's Lost Chapters OR Azula's New Cook" days.

Very good, very good! Certainly something I haven't seen before. I guess if I were too be critical I'd...well, question the entire atitude Raven has about all of this, but in actuality I'm enjoying the way this is panning out too much to care.
I'm curious as to what it'll be that will replace the rope that bound her; whether it be the aforementioned collar or a pair (or a quad, possibly) of cuffs, so don't keep me in suspense too long!

Just wanted to say that I love this story! Very well written and not to mention very orginal and creative! Awesome job and keep it up! Can't wait for the next instalment

I am looking forward to the next chapter of this story. Will Raven somehow get message to the titans in the future like scratching the arch her name or something? Will some disaster befall Sparta and Raven have to protect it revealing her full powers. Would her father actually try to rescue her and burn Sparta to the ground? Will she have some drama will her captive's wife? Will she or the potential child be the ancestor of one of the titans? Is Raven really knocked up? Im sorry fir all the questions but I'm really hooked please post soon :)