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Just wonder... when is slade going to come in? I hear only Brother Blood. Oh, Good Fic by the way.

Nice,I like this.Bumblebee is so harsh at times,yet she was always the tough girl in the show.Slade and Bee....hmmmmmm....why not,indeed?
Please continue,what girl could resist the uber sexy macho mysterious Slade-man?LOL,he is evil,isn't he?

This story is creepy, and I mean that as a compliment. I've never, ever imagined this side of Bumble Bee, but it is wonderfully disturbing. It does raise a question, though- why didn't she try to kill Cyborg? He may not be a girl, but he still usurped her (possible) position as leader in Titans East. For that matter, why did she invite him over at all?

I like how you have written Brother Blood. He feels sinister enough, but readers get the sense that he's still struggling to make it big as a villain. I've only seen villains as bumbling idiots or as perfect evil machines. This is the first time I've ever read about someone vaguely competent having to struggle to make it.

And finally, the story on FF.Net doesn't allow anonymous reviews. I don't know if you intended that or not.

.......WOW! That was a great start for a great story. Keep up the good work! If you don't post more, I'll be sad.