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for Mating Rituals

by cross64

person Shard
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it, BB and Star just seem to fit sometimes. I see a very interesting confrontation coming, I can't wait wanna read more and I'll probably reread the chapter now.
person FLEUR
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER 6 WAS TOTALLY FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!!
I LOVED IT!!!
THAT WHOLE, ALMOST GETTING CAUGHT THING WAS JUST FANTASTIC IT WAS HILARIOUS!!! PLEEAAAAAAAASSSSSEEEE WRITE MORE
I LIKED THAT WHOLE 'SCREW ROBIN I'M WIT BB NOW' THING WAS COOL
person jessica
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story love it but you should put more rae/rob in it and i love the bbandstar lemon goood
person LaLa13
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you, I love you, I LOVE you!!! FINALLY, someone got the couples right!!!!!! Robin and Raven forever!! Sweet lemons too. Great ideas for Tamaran rituals and lifespans and stuff. How do you know the character's ages, though? Where did you find them?
person Church
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT SO BEUTIFUL AND SEXY OMFG I CANT STOP READING THIS!!!!! ><
person IK
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!
person jenner
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha! nice job with that lemon dude! finally! was waitin for that! nice enden too! wicked chapter! nice work! now lets have rae and rob get a turn!
person CT
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*applauds you* Good chappie! Good Chappie! When Star began to get dominate I just KNEW what was going on. It was funny that it took BB so long, though. :D Glad he figured it out. Update again soon! Can the next one have some Rae/Rob??? :D
person Victoria Scott
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oi!
I would like to request a email everytime you update if you set up a mailing list that would be awesome. Thankies

P.S. My email again Blissfultorturex@gmail.com
person CT
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's REALLY good. Can't wait for next bit. I did like what you had written before, but I can see why this is easier for you to expand on. Do update soon. I'll just die if you don't. o.o