rate_review Reviews

Good pacing, interesting angle, creative Jinx&Cyborg setup. While it isn't all that unusual to see the BB/SF or RO/RAE pairings, you went about setting them up in a rather unusual -and deliciously machiavellic- way.
"Robin was a hypocrite" Is a bold and heavy statement that puts his character on the defendant's chair, pointing out a rather nasty spot on his shiny sparkly armor. I am a bit curious as to why so many authors portray Robin as evil incarnate, this is just an observation, not a criticisim, I wonder if it has something to do with the way that he is portrayed in the series that rubs fanfic writers the wrong way; perhaps because his character comes across as being lacking in some sort of humane aspect the way he obseses about missions or goals or the way he has issues expressing emotion...meh, I dunno any thoughts you have on the matter would be much appreciated.

Then again I could be wrong, maybe you are setting him up for some sort of redemtion, but it doesn't look that way right now.

All in all I am enjoying this story greatly and it would seem that you must have a lot more conflict brewing if you keep things progressing the way they are. Look foward to seeing the next update.

P.S. Mind my asking, but where did you come up with the life expectancy for Tamareneans? Your story is the first I hear of it.

Thanks.

Did you remake one of your chapters? like chapter 5?

Me again. I am so sorry if this is not you but I think there was one scene where beastboy was a cat and was doing something to Raven? I am not sure and if these perverted thoughts just popped into my head please disregard this message.

No, that WAS in this story, Anon, but it was taken down and this was put up instead. :D I liked them both

ahh! more more lemons! LEMONS PLEASE!!!! im gettin tired of jinx and cy. RaeRob or RobStar fucking please!!!!

OMG, you better write a lot more chapters. An actual, honest-to-God story, with the graphic bits woven flawlessly into it. You r teh man/woman.

:( You still haven't updated. You must! I'm waiting impatiently...

PWEASE put chapter 5 back up and chap. 6, while you're at it! *innocent grin* I love your fic and you cannot do this to me! *cries*

^.^ Doh! Great story so far, makes one smile and really get a deeper feeling of the characters. Keep up the great work. Ciao!

This is, probably, the most well-written TT lemon fanfic around.

However, the "story" is also decent, but to turn Star and Raven into whores sort of ruins the entire thing for me. Eh.