rate_review Reviews

I just read the first chap and I love it. I like how you made a backstory for starfires mating habits since it really makes you think its for real instead of just being thrown in there to make the sex happen. Awesome work mrrlyn. Im gonna go read the second chapter and see if BB gets his just rewards. >:)

PS: This is the first time I've read this couple in a story that was a lemon or regular fanfic. You actually made me like this couple when I thought it would never be one that I would like in a million years. I'd expect myself to like cyborg and Raven before I liked this pair. They ACTUALLY work. Go figure.

DAMN! That was great fucking stuff. Sorry for the language but damn. BB and starfire got a really hot scene together and the didn't even have to go all the way. Im hoping a future chapter will show them mating instead of "not-mating" though. >:) Although I wont really complain about more not-mating either *snikers*.

I liked starfire and BB scene alot, but I think raven and robin is what I liked the best. I've always really loved this couple. Birds of a feather ya know. Both dark, mysterios, and secretive. Plus i liked seeing them bond in the trigon season and in 'Haunted' more then all the robin and starfire stuff (though i still kinda like them as a couple i just like Raven better). Its great to finally see someone make a really great lemon with them. Thanks a bunch! If you do take requests like the one in this chapter btw, i'd like to see more of that rubbing against raven stuff. It was really hot and i really like how they couldn't help but do it with all that fixing the machine stuff they needed to get done. Mybe raven can do it while she's in her panties and robin isn't wearing anything...hehe, im pretty perverted aren't i.

Awesome. Like wow. Too good to be a TT fic even. I didn't think they could be good with all the shit out there. I mean, I'm actually giving a review to one, and that's saying something. Not only don't you stink, you're like a real writer spending time on cartoons. Which is cool, because I watch cartoons. Keep it up and definitely get Rae Rae and Robin screwin' each other soon. The coy shy girl routine is cute and sexy, but I want Raven to get down and dirty with the boy wonder ASAP. We all know she's a closet freak, so she shouldn't have any problem seducing Robbie-poo there and making him forget Star even existed; I mean, if she wears a god damn leatard to fight, what should we think she does in the sack.

nicely done, same as last chapter. It was interesting to picture Raven in a skirt, and you pulled it off quite easily. Keep it up, I look forward to the next chapter.

The BB/Starfire scene was awsome. But hey I love the pairing. Sorry I didn't read the robin/raven part. I kinda, well, I hate robin. I just can't stand the little asshole. Please make more BB/Starfire fics.

That was damn quick of you. I hope you didn't rush since this chapter felt a little more hasty when it came to the pacing and buildup. It was still pretty good though. :)

I'm looking forward to the "more to come" portion promised in the summary. ;)

Wow, that?s really cool and since I love the RaeRob pairing I can?t wait to read more - I?m sure it will be as great as the other chapters

WOW! That was really good! STARFIRE is my favorite teen titan , pairing her with BEAST BOY was really good. I really liked the dialogue. The script was true to the characters from how they acted (STARS innocence) to how they spoke. It was very well written. I would have liked to have read some actual intercourse with STARFIRE so I hope you put that in future chapters. Please update/add chapters soon!

Dude that fic rocked I loved it I just wish you had more on bb/star man. i can't wait till star on accident gets so arroused she loses her virginity to him.

Excellent story, really. Im a BBxrae fan, but you just cant deny an excellent story when you see it, regardless of the coupling, and I really did enjoy this. ^^ Do you take requests?