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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh, poor Robin. He has some devils/hellspawns looking to hook up with him but heaven itself is against him being with the girl he really wants. Lust's transformations were a nice touch. I'm looking forward to the rest of his training but I'm eager to see him settle the score w/ Slade and Terra. Or spend more time with Raven.
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July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how come you don't continue this on fanfiction.net, i'm a fan of this story and you haven't even written the fifthe chapter yet. good story and looking forward to the hext chapter as well. update soon as well from the creator of "Blood Oath" on fanfiction.net. laters, kylefighter1.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
make him take desire
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has amazing potential, and i greatly look forward to your next update. I usually dont like story this short(I mean chapter length) but this one is a rare exception. Good luck with your writing and hope you update soon.
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well if they're all going to be as short as this one I expect you to make at least one a day :-P.
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it and rejoice that you will be updating more often but must ask what will lust teach him? How to seduce his foes? What will the other six deadly sins teach him? And this may seem like a stupid question but why are the seven deadly sins so deadly who choose those sins to be the seven deadly ones why not some other sins? Why do the hellspawn want to take Terra and Slade down any way? Will you please update soon?
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude you got to update im practically going through withdrawls
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't drop this story and remember to update at FF.net too please.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GO YOU! me likey! almost a spawn-esque situation... i realy like this. the arguments/fights between "demons" and "Devils" is really what you come to expect after a while, especialy when one is a D&D Fanatic such as myself... i can only imagine what Lust will do to the poor sap when he finds him/her. that should be amusing.... SLoth should be easy to find of course... "Oh yeah great. here he is. whatever. do what you want, not likie i care..." hehehehe i can just see it. please update soon!
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June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm guessing you're thinking about this at least, but I think that Robin should rape Terra as his "1,000 times over" (or at least the beginning of that.)