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by artemisgirl

schedule June 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it was alright you should make more like this
person marichan
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude!! That's soooooo wrong! Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHA! funny!
person ansemsgummigirl
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that it would actually be gross. But alas, i was wrong. I was expecting something like...Beastboy transforming into a slug or something that has a naturally secreting body fluid that Starfire would stick inside her vagina (or whatever her people have...maybe she has a giant gaping mouth down there). But your idea only mildly squicked. You have failed! Mwahahaha.

~ansemsgummigirl
person fleur
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO wonder what Robin's thinking, great write more!!!
person Anon
schedule December 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not long enough!
person Greenlie2
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh.........my.............god........................................................

How WOULD she explain that to Robin?

Is this gonna have a sequal or another chapter?
person diablo627
schedule November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahaha i newwwwww it hahaha it made me gooo ewwww heheheh. niceeee
schedule November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok- that was funny- add a second chapter plz- I want to hear Starfire try to gather non-existing words.... haha
person sebasterd aka me
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
uh wel its actualy pretty good..unuseal and sick but good.