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by artemisgirl

person sebasterd aka me
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i read the other reviews and evry 1 pretty much agrees that it was unuseal but gog...o and i cant spell unuseal
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is going straight into my 'weird' file...though it isn't in my 'oh god no!' mental file. But then, maybe that's because what's already in 'oh dear god no!' is sufficiently disturbing enough to make me think 'this isn't so weird...' Ah well. Means I'm not bored at the least...

Anyway- nicely written short piece and of course, I have to give kudos for the ending. That just makes it, well, 'muchly good', and other such superlatives.
person Anonymous Flamer
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was *twitch* weird...
person AARON
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story was disgusting! It was just wrong! You should be ashamed of yourself! When are you going to put out chapter 2? I really want to read it.
person magnam
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAHHHHHHH
*gasps*
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH *starts to weep*



at least it was well written...if you'll excuse me, I have to shower now
person mar
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well...I must say that I'm actually not disturbed in the least. *shakes head* I guess I must be defective seeing as everyone else was freaked out by it. Oh well. Loved how you randomly threw in Robin. But really, what was she expecting doing something like that in the living room?
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Best Odd Couple thing, if you can call it that.
person Kokuryu
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Artemis, you are a twisted girl, but I'm a rather twisted boy, so any complaint on my part will sound hypocritical. Besides, the story was good for a laugh. (I have a really messed-up sense of humor, you see.) Anyway, are you going to update that story in which Raven's trying to find a way to free Terra so they can be together any time soon?
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I will give you marks for an articulate legible story. Twisted? I dunno wait till you read MY stories Hell I have demons and other crap shacking up.

It's an interesting and bizzare occurance to be certain. Hell I think Robin is either Gay or right bastard anyway. He can die of blue balls for all I care.

Looking forward to more with Vested intruige(As long as you don't split BB/Raven up sue me I am a sucker for BB/Rae)
BrianDarksoul(The Australian guy that gives Freddie Kruger Ideas!)
person Earthix
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! Get robin in to it! ORGY!