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October 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please continue this asap. i really enjoy your story and would be very disapointed if you just end it here
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, had a lil of everything and stayed in charactor quite well, please update!
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a pritty good story, 'yall.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is very rare to find fics as in charachter and well written as this, it's even rarer to find well thought out background stories for original charachters. excellent work keep it up
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say, you are a very good writer. The character youve made is well thought out, and even the smutty stuff isnt mindless drivel. You do have a problem with spelling though, using sense instead of since, and the like. If you could find someone to proof read for you, it would make the story flow a little better. Maybe I'm just anal about spelling... In any event, keep up the good work
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey this one is kinda like the one on fanfic.net! 'cept its got a little more detail.
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story...I want more....Write more...I want to know what happens next...That's all I can think of to say...I just like it...I love it...
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great keep it up please write more and longer chapters
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep it up only problem is the chapters are way to short make them longer. other than that a great storie so far
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far man. Keep up the good work. Dallas looks to be a really good character, keep it up man.