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for I thought you loved me

by dragonkyng

schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A bit rushed, I think. The reactions of the others would have been interesting to see. Even something as simple as one of them collecting bet money on whether or not they were a couple.
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A little rushed, but good. A longer verison would be awesome. Also, typos!