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for Loss and Gain

by Proto

schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when will you update?
person Chris
schedule November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Potentially a good story, but way too short for a chapter. You seem to have a lot of fics on the go that haven't been updated for ages. Why not try persevering with a couple, instead of starting lots and trying to do too much?
person emo girl
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAOI! real unadultered yaoi! i love you!
person sailorgirl16
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's good so far update soon!
person depthsofpassion
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good so far. but u gotta make chapters longer and more detailed. Or ppl will lose intrest. keep going with this.