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I sorry I kinda laughed when you gave your reasons for making Slade 20, when he's immortal and around 70. *snickers*

Well apparently it's not finished, with the whole tbc thing, but I did enjoyed it. You might need to review this story though as I spotted a few mistakes here and there that looked like this: ththis. I'm sure it was most likely when you updated it.

Oh! And I loved the scene when Robin was first seduced! "I feel hot... can you stop it Slade?" So cute! ^^

So cute! It better be real! lol

ITS INTERESTING, BUT YOU SHOULD CHECK FOR MISTAKES MORE, SEVERAL PLACES YOU HAD WORDS REPEATING, OR MISSPELED. ALSO YOU SHOULD FOCUS ON THE OTHER TITIANS FEELINGS FOR ROBIN, ONE MORE THING YOU CAN'T JUST BLUNTLEY SAY THINGS, YOU HAVE TO DESCRIBE IT MORE THAN TO OUTRIGHT SAY IT, FOR EXAMPLE JUST WHEN A CHARACTER IS WALKING YOU CAN DESCRIBE THE FOOTFALLS, THE SWAY OF THEIR HAIR, AN EMOTION ON THEIR FACE, WHAT THEY SEE AND THEIR INTERNAL THOUGHTS, GET IT?

I have really enjoyed the story so far please continue.

May I suggest that you add on how Robin will tell Bateman that he is pregnant. If I remember correctly he is Robin's legal guardian.

Oh my god! I love this fic absolutely. I just came by here to find Robin/Star fic but then I fuond this and fell in love with it (as I am head over heels in love with yaoi)
This story really has a good plot and it's well written in my opinion so I hope you write more I'm really looking forward to it love ya

I really enjoyed this story so far. It is a great read.

I have a suggestion were is the babies room in the tower? What will it look like?

It's *Cyborg*, not Cybrog.

Please continue ASAP. This is by far the best one i've read on this cool site. Rocky.

to all of you out their who think it is imposible for a man to have a baby, I'm sorry to inform you that it is verry possible even in real life. You could either furtalize the egg and inject it into a small cavity in a mans body near the bladder. i don't know the name of it but it is there, look it up if you don't believe me. the featus is responsable for the groth of the umbilical cord so it may take a few trials befor the fetus latches on to a viable blood sorce. then the baby could gow normaly with hrt (hormone replacement theripy) untill it reaches term when it is removed via cecerian section. this approach is comonly practiced in infertal women and is aplicable to men with slight alterations to the homnes givin in hrt. then their is the verry real prospect of slight genetic alterations by nanites described in this story. then their is the most viable option to date. It involvs taking a virous like the flu and changing its dna through removal of of parts of it's dna by acid stimulation. following that parts of the original dna for the subrect is injected io ensure thatr the body won't reject the new traits. then the virous could be injected into the intended person. it would do as all virioses do and start changing the dna of cells it attacks and spreading through the boddy. it would take a constant period of injections for the mutation to take but when it does the chang would be semi-permannent and efective. manny other mutations such as furr and fang groth can be acheived through this method.