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well alright! nice work! this chapter was extremely well done! we are startin to see a new side of slade, a jealous and gentle slade. this slade we should see more often. Have them both love eachother! make slade show robin his caring, let him shw robin he cares and that he is protective of his little robin. Have them admit this to eachother please. have the 2 most stubborn characters admit their love for one another.

clever plot, very well written as well, there's nothing worse than a fantastic story written in a ten year-old's english!!! is slade gonna be pissed when/if he finds out robin's been (nearly) screwing around??!! if shagging him is just for fun, i'd like to know what slade would do to punish robin!! i'll be keeping an eye on this story for sure.

AHHH I love this story it's so truthful! God Slade is NASTY he better not be doing anything WORSE to Robin than he already is! Hey you gonna have Robin go out as Dick in this story? I mean you keep saying he needs to get away, what better way to get away than as yourself where your friends wouldn't recognize you. None of the Titans know who Robin really is. You could even have him go home for a few days, see bruce. When people write from teen titans they forget that all the supper hero's have BIG pasts befor this group most them them you see the pasts in the show but they just expect you to know Robins but no one ever does anything with it! Anyway good story!

Although I only got halfway through this (I will return and read the entire thing) I am enjoying the slow build up of tension in the story. But.... it's crammed together, with little spacing or care for breaks. That makes it difficult to read. You might consider correcting that as it causes a headache, and is the reason I have to read this a bit at a time.

very nice! Please continue on with the story!

Ooo, that's good! I love the idea of Robin addicted to Slade like that. I was listening to Nine Inch Nail's "The Perfect Drug" while reading. It's pretty fitting.

"I got my head, but my head is unraveling
Can't keep control, can't keep track of where it's travelling
I got my heart, but my heart's no good
And you're the only one that's understood
I come along, but I don't know where you're taking me
I shouldn't go, but you're wrenching, dragging, shaking me
Turn off the sun, pull the stars from the sky
The more I give to you the more I die
And I want you
You are the perfect drug
You make me hard when I'm all soft inside
I'll see the truth when I'm all stupid-eyed
The arrow goes straight through my heart
Without you everything just falls apart
My blood wants to say hello to you
My feelings want the deadly side of you
My soul is so afraid to realize
How very little good is left of me
And I want you
You are the perfect drug
Without you, without you everything falls apart
Without you, it's not as much fun to pick up the pieces"

See what I mean? Anyway, I'd love to see more of this!

A good one, I definitely enjoyed reading it!
It stilllacks a certain something, I can't put my finger on it though...
...which is why I'm really looking forward to the next part! Keep it up! ^_^x

~Horizont

Too lazy to log in... lol . But this was a wonderful TTFF Not many people can do Teen Titans well it is always a pleasure to find somebody that can.

Yahh! Good!Update!

Nice job dude. this is turing out fantastic. I love the detailed lemon! that was written wonderfully. And it was a pleasure to read. Nice work. As for a suggestion...uh, it would be pretty kool if Raven saw in detail one of Robin and Slade's times together, (rough), and maybe talk to Robin about it. That would be intresting indeed. imagine the look on ravens face if she sees it in a dream! ha! well, i hope u find my idea useful. Please update soon. peace.