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for The Low Spark

by shivac

person Lauren
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes! finally a good BB+Cy fic...*sighs happily* i loved it! wondeful! loved how cyborg's thoughts read...very funny ^.^ great job. *saves fic* love this fic
person trustinangels
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely awsome story. The ending was so fantastic, and I loved picturing BB against Cy's neck.

And the '(that's what the normal 99% of the human race calls an orgasm, vic)' was hilarious. Please write more stories. You're very talented.
person Mikel
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a whole lot better than I expected. Great job!
person Ownage!
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic certainly sparked my interest ;-) A truly Fantastic piece of work! I really hope to see more Cy/BB,Cy/_,BB/_ pairings in the future!
person brittany
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
tell me you're gonna make another chapter, please oh please tell me you will. i've waited FOREVER for cyborg fics and this one was awesome!!! so well written and so perfectly paired up! (don't cyborg and bb make an adorable couple??) ^^
person MistressofDragons
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was good. . . really good. unexpectedly good. nothing against Cyborg but and and sex usually don't compute. . . how much of him IS flesh anyway?
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anyway wonderful job! absolutely perfect job! i guess Cyborg and sex aren't as far apart as i thought. . . i'll have to remember that when i write my next fic. . .
do write more! ja ne!
person Critique
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well! I was impressed, truly. That was a very unique idea. Not to say some one else wouldn't have done it eventually, but you have a lot of talent for writing. As a side note, you could have extended it a bit. Otherwise, very well done.
person Macelf
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAMN, this is a good story!!! You have an amazing talent for in-depth description, and WOW was that a great sex scene! Please, write more!!!