rate_review Reviews

Cute. Any plans for BBRae pairing?

I loved the story, even if I wish the actual intercourse was given more than a paragraph ;s. One thing i noticed though is more than a few typos: replacing probably with properly and vice versa, spelling thrust "trust". None of it really got in the way of enjoying the story but if you're looking to do any improvements maybe there is a place to start.

Sweet and cute. Well written.
SailorNemesis