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OMG, pleaaase write moreeee *--*

This story is still absolutely amazing! I wish there was more, but I do get a real kick out of reading it again and again. I still think Ben is Slade, it's pretty obvious. But it adds to the suspense in a "Little did she know..." kind of way. This is an expert device to use. I know it's Slade, but Raven and no one else does. Ben is very likable. I think he has real feelings for her. As much as I like a hunky bad guy, I like the idea of Raven ending up with Slade/Ben. He could try to reform. Join the Titans. They'd kick major butt with him by their side. And when the others ask why they should trust him, Raven could say, "Because he's making up for everything he's done every day for the rest of his life here." It would be so sweet. I'd love to see what you do. I still like Robin, but no reason is a good enough reason to disrespect a woman who gives and trusts herself to you and supports you. You can't put love on the back-burner. If he does it once, he'll just end up doing it again and I really love Raven's character. She's so dynamic. She's just a comic/cartoon character but I really want to see her happy. Even in a fan fiction. You gave a really good description of Ben, but does he have any other features? I would love to draw a picture of him and send it to you. If you like the idea, here is my email m_richelieu@hotmail.com Thanks for your time! I hope you right more to this story.