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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was really good.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey i thought that your story was really good so far, but if u need to spice it up some more here r some of my fave. pairings
Terra/beastboy,cy/bee,rob/star,cy/rave
Terra/beastboy,cy/bee,rob/star,cy/rave
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a good story. but i would like to see some starfire robin action and what about cyborg he's all alone. ne wyz good story
and is there a sequel cuz that ending left me wanting more
and is there a sequel cuz that ending left me wanting more
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your storys there very well thought out..... and the realisem of the sex lets me know you know ferst hand of these thengs :) as do i. i was wonding if you chould do a seen where slade sorda kinda rapes starfire... not that i am into the hole rape theng i just think it suts slade, and i like starfire :)
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far, but i think it should include some terra beast boy action! keep up the good work!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think u r story is really good, but it nees some pairings that can actually happen ex.(terra/bb, cy/bee,rob/star)
keep it up!
keep it up!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very well written fanfic. Nicely done with many good scenes. Bravo.
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, would you make one about beast boy and terra? Their my favorite pairing and i think it can be an entire chapter.
Also your story is great so far!
Also your story is great so far!
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great lemon..I'm not really a Raeven/ Beast Boy fan but that was good update soon
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter was kinda anti climactic if you ask me. It also would've been better if you made beast boy huge but whatever >_>