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for Be carful what you eat

by Malcore

person Khalif Foster
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, it has been a while since you update that story. It was good. Can ya include male. Sexual activity, not just toilet. Can include toilet activity from front. Even afterward after their will is back. That means can decide themself to do it or not unlike the story I read it recently they can't decide themself. They are under her control. Would ya willing to write challenge story about Harry Potter?? Hermione/Ron/Harry with Ginny. Nasty story.
person garsdal
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is the most extravagant blend of preverted, funny and hot ever. when is the next chapter comming up?
person cio
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE A SICK FUCK

and i love it

keep up the good work

shit out a hit
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao, this is great
person Bishonen
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well the update was shrot but it was good cant wait for the next chapter.

With Love, Imasuky Lomae
person spencer
schedule July 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome story please do more love this one
schedule July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this one is interesting to say the least. I would like to read more.
person emmanuel
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude, story rocks, keep at it
person Bishonen
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that was an update but it wasnt very long it was really good but after so long a wait it would have been nice to have more cant wait to see what happens next.

With Love, Imasuky Lomae
person ReadingLurker
schedule June 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was awsome you should update WAY more often cant wait to read more