rate_review Reviews

This was a fucking piece of shit, that only hero worshiped Beast boy all the way. i only read it, hoping you would do smarten up. I hate this entire story, Robin doesn't deserve this shit, and you should of just wrote him out in the first chapter instead of this bullshit.

Alright...that was wrong of me...and i take it back..this isn't a piece of shit.
Look, this story does have it's great things going for it, but shitting all over Robin like this is bull. and he wouldn't of backed down to beast, because Robin has faced far worse.
But i do like your starfire, it reminds me of the starfire from the comics. All in all, if you could have robin grow a pair, and stand up to Beast, even if he gets his ass kicked, and maybe stop being such a allround pussy,plus tone down the hero worship of Beast...it would make it a better story.

i'll admit that i'm a very picky person when it comes to stories, but i think this is decent, could prolong the sex scenes a little and a bit more detail at parts but all in all its a good read, keep up the good work

I've got to say I'm disappointed after reading this story. You've obviously have great potential and talent as a writer but this story seems to be hitting the biggest cliche Teen Titans lemons are known for:

Every character has had a total personality change: Beast Boy is no longer a vegetarian comedian, Raven is over sexed, Robin is acting like an asshole for no reason (That is way overused in this genre).
I hope I'm not being to harsh but I'm just trying to help out a little. Like I said before you've got great potential just try and avoid these cliches in the future.

That was one of the best Chapters I have ever read, can't wait to see what happens next (update soon plz)(can you Plz add Starfire to the Pairing plz???)

That cant be the end . There needs to be more. Please write more!!!! Im begging you!!!!!!