rate_review Reviews

I want to read this story, and I have gotten through most of it, but it just doesn't seem to grab me. I suspect it maybe the broken writing style, shifting from one character to another without noticeable transitions although it might just be the lack of emotion. I do like the story, and it as I said I do Want to read it, but it seem just to nondescript to be worth the effort. There are actions, but there aren't reactions, or at least their doesn't seem to be any. I don't know how you might add grip, but I can say were it to be added, this has the potential to become a most wonderful story.

Interesting twist. I'm really hoping that Wykkyd and Raven will be able to carry on together in some way once she's no longer with the HIVE. It's nice to find fanfiction devoted to a relationship between them that's halfway articulate, much less as pleasant to read as this has been. It's a dark seduction, edgy. I like. Very much.
Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to seeing how this will play out.

Very nice, indeed. There's some sort of innate connection between Kyd Wykkyd and Raven that is seldom explored in fanfiction, I think. You're doing well building on it.

Keep up the good work!

Nice! I'm intrigued with the possibility of something more serious between Wykkyd and Raven. Keep up the good work; I'll be looking forward to more.

Ugh, pretty horrible 'initiation' there. Poor Raven.

So, Kyd Wykkyd's got a crush on Raven, huh? And Jinx seems to be a bit jealous...hmm. Things are getting mighty interesting. Can't wait till next chapter.

This looks to be an interesting story. I've read stories before where Raven's quit the Titans, but this one looks to be a lot better than many of those stories I've read. Can't wait to see what happens next. Also hope you'll continue with 'Material Girl', as well.