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for Hell On earth

by Lemonzluver

person Nirvana-X
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You dont suck, you never sucked, you rule, remember that!
person killyjoy
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is weird, I sound exactly like your sister... I'm good at math (honors class, woot!), I write well, I write fanfics, I make graphics, I'm lazy as all hell, the only difference is that I can't live without hot angsty yaoi lemons. >.< I need them to make my computer lemony fresh.
This isn't really much of a reveiw so far... Hmmm.
Right well, it was short (nothing wrong with that), but you had a lot of typos (maybe you should get a beta), and Slade seems a little OOC (not much though). There you go, constructive critisism at it's best! >.<
person Some Guy
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You're a girl? I never would've guessed that. The story is great, it's a real turn-on.
person animeenthusiest
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good work dude. keep it up.
person Some guy
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Torture and humiliation? I love it.
person Some Guy
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, it's not bad but look closer at the spelling of your words next time and make it longer, update soon please.