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person Chris
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This good fun, with really funny dialogue to match the characters, and with hot sex too! I'm old enough to remember when comics were fun, so more please.
person mariel
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
babe you rock i hope that wasnt the end if you write more il definatly read it
person Lumpkin
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was pretty funny,
the whole story is well written and the sex scenes were good
KEEP IT GREASY
person Cyraxr
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First that was well written, second that was wrong on so many levels I have no idea were to start so I won't, third I expected Bumble Bee but Aqualad was not in the forecast for that one and I am leaving it at that, and fourth that was funny. Signed a fan of Blackfire, Raven, and Jinx.
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my bad love the story hope to read more and not fall off the cliffs
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good update.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness-
person Canadian_Boy
schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn....god that was fuckin funny.... i;m seriouse i have read hundreds of stories and i have never shot rice out of my nose while reading it... really i was eating supper and then you started in the robin is a dick jokes... i fired rice onto my keyboard.... really rice from the nose... quite painfull actually.....


aaanyway... gunna read the rest and probably your nightcrawler story.... i like xmen
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you SOB I hate you why the cliff Why?!
person Cyraxr
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm I wonder who the other two were do they have something to do with the person that Cyborg called. Oh yes another wonderfully delightful chapter. Update soon please. Signed a fan of Blackfire, Raven, and Jinx.
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, now you've definetly caught my interest. update soon.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness