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person Cyraxr
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow very good. The story says there is more to it so please show it to us. Signed a fan of Blackfire, Raven, and Jinx.
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
heheh. good chapter. update.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness-
person Lolths Champion
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. I don't think I stopped giggling.
person ree
schedule May 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ha, ha, ha...oh god! that was soo funny!!! hope you update soon on a new chapter soon!
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good. i enjoyed the story and the constant barrage of insults on BB.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness-
person Hate
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very Good! I loved it! :) Are you going to continue, are Robin and Starfire ever going to have sex?
person Incognito
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great!

The dialogues are OK imo.
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh come on dont do this to us! Sequel please! Preferably that answers 1) if Robin and Star will EVER do it... 2) Raven's Spell that requires a Virgin Sacrifice (hopefully the only thing being sacrificed is the virginity) and last but not least 3) who was the girl that Cyborg was talking to.