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for in season

by ubermann

person nos482
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice very nice cliffy
person bloodrain
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it Keep up the good work by the way read poor beast an tell me what you think please well keep written
person Shard
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4 Closer.
A rather interesting and enigmatic addition to this story.
I wait paitentlly for more.
person bogbrush
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
meh....it was ok, but the piss on the door thing kinda creeped me out
person nos482
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, cant wait for the next chapter man, wanted to do something like this in nature of the change but eh i've hit writers block in that particular story
person Miraku
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, i dont like the little Rob/Rae thing but good none-the-less
person Orlando Jordan
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Sigh* You don't seem to have a grasp of the character and how they would act. Also, I've seen this idea for a story before.

My main peeve is how you potray Robin. It isn't very accurate.